2024年(甲卷)高考英语作文
题目为Development of Transport in China (交通工具在中国的发展)。
作为主题句，首句不仅有语法问题，还不符合题意。(请看图中红字标注) 这种错误、这么多错误，出现在高考这种级别的考试中，可以说是出题人的严重失误。
不用说，首句要完全重写。根据图片，题目也不合格。因为“发展”两个字谈的是历史，是动态的演变；而给出的三张图并非展现某种交通工具演变的三个阶段，而是三种交通工具各自的最新形态；所以，按照配图，题目不应该谈发展，而应该谈现状。
下面是我的一篇习作：
Ways to Travel in Today’s China
(今日中国的出行方式)
Going out and about has never been easier in China today. To start with, we have ride-share bikes in towns and cities for short trips. These bikes can be found at the roadside for you to pay to have a ride. And trains are much faster now. There are high-speed trains that travel 200 kph plus, which significantly cuts down on the time we spend on travelling between cities. Finally, we have electric cars. Instead of running on petrol, this new type of cars are powered by electricity. This means they emit zero carbon dioxide, making cars more environment-friendly.
As technology continues to advance, I’m sure there will be more ways to travel in the future, faster and greener.
Thank you for your attention.
今日中国的出行方式
在中国，出行从未像现在这样方便。首先，城镇里有可以短途骑行的共享自行车。你可以在路边找到这些自行车，付费后就可以骑一次。现在火车也快多了。动车的运行时速在 200 公里以上，大大缩短了城市间的旅行时间。最后，我们还有电动汽车。这种新型汽车不使用汽油，而是使用电力驱动。这意味着它们不会排放二氧化碳，更加环保。
随着技术的不断进步，我相信未来会有更多更快更环保的出行方式。
感谢大家观看。